Great start! The only thing that's not clear is what the portals are, and what they are for and replacing. This is important to add even though we will say it. The reson begin that when they come around as a group to pick the winners the board is the only thing that can speak for us.
It would also be nice to show that the home portal and other devices are also aces sable by smart phone they wouldn't be able to make that connection themselves based on how things went the last crit.
Great start! The only thing that's not clear is what the portals are, and what they are for and replacing. This is important to add even though we will say it. The reson begin that when they come around as a group to pick the winners the board is the only thing that can speak for us.
ReplyDeleteIt would also be nice to show that the home portal and other devices are also aces sable by smart phone they wouldn't be able to make that connection themselves based on how things went the last crit.
We're we still thinking about a animation?